Character Authenticity: How to Nail Shut the Trap Doors in Your Story

Lack of character authenticity is the trap door of the literary world. Readers can be skipping along, humming cheerfully to themselves as they explore a lovely story and then whoosh! Down they go. Because a character did something inauthentic. Because suddenly, NOTHING MAKES SENSE ANYMORE. You can have the most FLAWLESSLY crafted plotline in the whole history of bloody … Continue reading Character Authenticity: How to Nail Shut the Trap Doors in Your Story

The Five Pitfalls of Author Interference

Words. Worlds. Characters. We create them, so we should be able to control them, right? But there are consequences to holding the reins too tightly, and carpal tunnel is only one of them. Here are some pitfalls you might want to avoid: 1) “As You Know Bob” Dialog This is when the author makes the characters talk about things which … Continue reading The Five Pitfalls of Author Interference

Building Blocks of Character: Part 1

This is a middle grade manuscript. It has Issues. Based on feedback from a recent round of submissions, its characters are getting a makeover. Of course there are plenty of other Issues I could tackle, but for this revision I’m focusing on making the main characters more well-developed and relatable. To research this topic, I’ve … Continue reading Building Blocks of Character: Part 1