Great examples. I think you really hit something here that we sometimes forget – the importance of the emotional to be married to the action. Great post.
What a great idea. Elizabeth, I'm totally with you on that one. As I look at my manuscript, the scenes I like best are the ones where this shift exists. Thank you, Rosalyn! Now for some more revision. 🙂
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Great examples. I think you really hit something here that we sometimes forget – the importance of the emotional to be married to the action. Great post.
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Very intriguing. I will have to see how I can apply this to my own writing. I need something that pushes it from all right to can't put down.
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What a great idea. Elizabeth, I'm totally with you on that one. As I look at my manuscript, the scenes I like best are the ones where this shift exists. Thank you, Rosalyn! Now for some more revision. 🙂
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